All Comments on 'My Innocent Wife Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Pathetic

WTF is wrong with you???

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
There's 3 min's of my life I can't get back!!!

There's 3 min's of my life I can't get back!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
annony your life is shit anyway

so 3 mins. is a gift to you. r5 for a great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
What the fuck kind of story is this

You need to find some womens clothes and just start sucking dick . This is gay femdom shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
no more chapters please

go away

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Come on, really?

That's not a story, it's simply bullshit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
If a Sequel, Please Put it in Fetish

Hubby is so deranged that Loving Wives is not even a logical place for this.

handaJizzhandaJizzover 7 years ago

This story needs to be more like that basketball players cock... ie fleshed out a bit

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
puke!

Glad I did not waste time scanning this piece of shit. The comments really tell the story.

becontree2001ukbecontree2001ukover 7 years ago

It is a shame that so many just want to criticise without any constructive feed-back on why. Writing a story can be difficult, so kudos to anyone who tries

TigersmanTigersmanover 7 years ago
Good story

About a cheating wife who became addicted to black cock. The story could have been fleshed out a little more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Dumb ass negative annons

ROFLMAO"all you negative annons trying to give a piece of your mind in the comments then finding you have none to give. Your pious and disgusting remarks show the kind of inbred low life scum you truelly are.

Author. Its takes guts to put a story out there. Something the cowards leaving the shit remarks cannot do... *****

WhackdoodleWhackdoodleover 7 years ago
I dont care that she became a BBC slut

But you describe the husband in the worst way possible which defeats the purpose. It is the laziest way to forward a story because it doesnt require any work. And honestly? This scenario has been fobe to absolute death. There is no explanation how such a pathetic human being can hook up with and marry a hottie or even get a job not bailing bottles at the local bottle depot with the rest of the retards, illegals and ex cons.

All in all, just another boring af story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Why write this!

This isn't a careless put down.

Seriously, why write it?

Did it really happen? Just for clarity, I don't think so.

An exploration of human emotion, display of inner conflict, a desire to try writing?

A whim? Why bother?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Not enough

I was getting a boner. And the story ended. I think you should have stretched it a bit more. Great story

Rc68Rc68over 7 years ago
Garbage

Typical garbage, big black dick, wimpy white guy and a slut wife..... Boring and just plain horrible writing, you used the word just in a sentence three times which is just lazy and not worth my time.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Time to move on.

If you like the idea of any man keeping a cheating wife who likes to humiliate him then this is your type of story. If you think every man needs to grow a pair then forget this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wrong category

I think this belongs in the cuckold section. Seems a little too fast paced but hits the right spots. I think it's meant to have a second part.

leatherfreak77leatherfreak77almost 5 years ago

Thats it if the hubby in the story finishes as quickly as this story no wonder she looks somewhere else.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Wimp

WimpWimpWimp! Just shoot youself.

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