All Comments on 'Second Fiddle'

by legerdemer

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AngelineAngelineover 7 years ago
I like the measured tone

as your poem proceeds gracefully to its rather unexpected conclusion. Doesn't get overly sentimental, just unflinching and direct: not a misstep to be found!

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellover 7 years ago
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I like the originality of the subject, very hard to come by these days when everyone has got there before. I particularly like stanza two's metaphoric allusion.

Very well done.

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