by trigudis
Each of us will have our own personal view of Ben's actions (or lack thereof) but I really liked the way it was written.
We all fall. Every day. Temptation is just too.... tempting. But I applaud the author's recognition of the struggle.
One are to develop is Ben's inner turmoil. Even though he spoke to his Rabbi.. how much was he conflicted?
Interesting characters. That is what I enjoy with your writing - well painted dimensional characters. I will ponder this story for a while - questions of character and lack thereof. I enjoyed it. Thanks as always for the submission.
The Rabbi will tell you the Torah and Talmud are clear. That love is for G*d, not for husband and wife.
The Rebbe will tell you not to let her find a goyim, as that would truly be a shanda.
Your mother would ask: So what took so longk? Tell her to divorce that nudnik.
Now, how many grand babies will I have?
Yeah, I already read the second story, and he doesn't really love her after all. Or at least he loves his cock and her sexual favors more. Its very human and very sad. She married prematurely, she made a mistake. Mistakes have consequences. Ben and Mindy should consider that compounding mistakes is a poor way to correct previous bad decisions. I hope they at least end up acting in ways that allow them to respect each other in the future. Then maybe friendship and love will follow, if its meant to be.
i really like your writing.
unless all your stories are linked. id really like to see more
thankyou again for your writing
very enjoyable
*****What a fun read dealing with real life. Been there done that. And had the same feelings as Ben. Very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.