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Great Metaphor
because yes poetry moves in its small way to a wider completion. The formatting works well too to move the poem in a way that fits the rolling water image. "shining sea" caught me briefly because, well probably because of the last line of America the Beautiful, lol, so it came off cliche to me--another modifier would seem fresher, I thought, but that's really really a nitpick in what is a lovely poem. Thank you for posting it. :)
The Circle of poetry
The alliterative nature of your description seems quite appropriate for the purpose of the metaphor. I like the blended ideas acknowledgement and the final touch of recycling.
Now are we going to see a poem about a "Muse Monsoon",
or a "Dearth Drought"?
A great read
I agree with the other commenters before me, you draw everything possible from a great metaphor to draw a wonderfully vivid picture. I enjoy your work, K.
Wonderful words
This is such pretty work. Every time I read it, I love it more.
into banks of trees
wider turns
deeper beds
together large
impressive channels
for the intercourse
that frames our days
Beds for intercourse. I knew I could count on you! Brilliantly written, as always.
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I already have one of your poems in my Favs, The Lighthouse keeper and this one is right up there! Thanks,
Boo
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