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by Angeline04/21/04

This is lovely

the structure works so well to support the content--a pause of thought that goes briefly elsewhere on a busy morning. I'm really enjoying your poetry. :)

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by YDD04/21/04

9... 8... 7...

I hope it is a real vacation
and not just a daydream.
Humdrum repetition of
familiar family fusses
needs a break of contrast
for survival.

Hope has to be a fog doesn't it.
If it was clear,
would it still be hope
or merely fate?

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by Tathagata04/21/04

I hope

the dream is fulfilled.
it's hard enough to live in the present when you Aren't counting down.
: )
hang in there

Thank you for this

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by 04/21/04

Wistful

I, too, hope your dream of travel comes true. Who knows what wonderful ideas your muse would supply you with. This one is lovely, I commend your muse.

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