All Comments on 'Bound at the Beach'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Pure fantasy, and totally unrealistic. No XXI Century female could be that dumb or trusting

FASfanFASfanover 7 years ago
If you want realism, watch the news ...

... this is fantasy, and pretty good it is too. Thank you, CC, for an entertaining read. Please have five stars.

curiouscarolecuriouscaroleover 7 years ago
Love the concept but lost it with "taught " when you meant "taut" sorry but spell check only does half the job.

Nice idea but polish before posting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Fantasy is not real

By definition, fantasy is imagining things, especially things that are impossible or improbable. No woman today would do as Cat did. But we would all want to! Nicely written. Left me with a smile and a tingle.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Consenting and safe sex

Yessss to this story! Good elements of fantasy/spontaneity and clear points of asking for consent, open communication between participants and safe sex! All without being preachy and definitely while being sexy. A*

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