All Comments on 'Auntie Was A Nun'

the lotion/swimming thing has been done to death, and your grasp of the written English language is laughable. Proofread your stuff, or write in whatever your native language is, cause that was pretty bad.

It wasnt bad per say... Get a proofreader for certian and I agree the suntan things been done to death but in cases as such, it almost always makes sense...

Hope you dont stop writing, and continue this one. I could see her coming back for more and having inner troubles dealing with the fact thats shes no longer pure...

To those who left me a comment much appreciated, I would like to reply to the American guy who said that my Eglish was poor, first of all I studied in England for three years and obtained a BSc Honours in Economics with that english, secondly some of the words are words you don't learn at school nor at university. Lastly you say that I should try to write in my native language, well the aim of an author is to be read, not many people read French on that website and moreover the day you can write french as good as I can write english then you wll be allowed to criticise!!!

I was good for your first try now that you have a base story add to it and write another chapter and see where the story goes as it is your story and your creation

ONE OF BEST I HAVE READ,THANKS FOR WRITING APART OF YOURSELF.KEEP WRITING AND YOU WILL GET BETTER AND SO ON.

All you people that said for him to proof read it, shut the hell up. The story was good and if you dont like it theres hundreds more you can read so go do that and dont waste time writing crap. Good job with your story. Hope to read more later

i loved it.. clapping, hope to read more in the future by You! *~Velvet kitten~*

You are a gutless scoundrel you bad mouth the writer yet you do not have the balls to sign your name.You would be lucky if you could even spell your name muchless write it.

this was a really good story i like it alot and hope to see more chapters from you in this catagory keep up the good work... and for the cridict shut up and read another story

As to ug..your an idiot. Love to see your submission in French....as to your story gandalfwizard...I loved it. I have read a couple of your stories and like them both. Pardon the idiots that give some of us a bad name.

cut to the chase...have him knock up his aunt. it would be a scandal since she is a nun and catholics don't believe in abortion.They would run away together and have intense pregnant sex. go for it

it's about time i saw more nun stories out here. hope to here more nun stories from ya!

You should continue this story,at least until the parents re turn from vacation.Would like to know what the relationship turned into for these two.

That was amazing.

I agree with the other comments. This topic has not been explored often and you did an outstanding job with it - great ending. I'd like to see a series of stories with these two characters. The romantic in me wants to see them wind up together as permanent lovers.

I think you spoiled it by the point to let the nun have a far too open blouse, following up by a bikini next to nothing. I mean, come on, shes a nun and even if she left fot churchwork, i think its pretty unrealistic that she dresses like a whore as soon as shes left the convent.

A bit more reality and a longer time to reach the climax of the story (sex) after all, she is a nun and it would take a bit of convincing her even to wear normal clothes, let alone show some cleavage or else.

Defenetly too short. But I love the way you bring the event slowly. Very good writer. Not too complicated and still a well brought up story.

thanks

USE IT!

Well, I noticed many spelling and grammar errors when reading this. Overall it was also too short and she was -far- too easy, the story should have been longer so that he could have worked on seducing her; maybe he has her catch him having sex with another woman to get her turned on and to see him as a sexual entity, causing her to start masterbating to him?

I enjoyed it although I would have liked a bit more of a build up with some sexual tension but I can't moan it got my dick hard

I enjoyed every single word you wrote down and will continue reading your written work.You made me make quite a mess on myself,not once but twice...before the ending of your story,lol.

if it were my auntie, I would make sure she had all the log she needed.

A little rough in spots, but very good overall, I enjoyed it. It was not a bad first effort. Don't get too discouraged by all of those "English" perfectionists out there. Like I've told many new authors, some of the best authors on this site couldn't give a rat's ass about literary perfection. Keep writing your stories. If you find an editor, fine. If not, it's still fine. Many of us out here appreciate what you do.

This story is written with sensitivity.

I liked the way you slowly introduced actually having sex with Sara, it conveyed a sense of care and respect that is sadly lacking in so many stories

Please write more stories, particularly in the same genre as this one.

work on your english grammar the story was great

the story was awesome, only wish it was longer

weird,she was on her front but you did,nt turn her over but still somehow took her missionary style

Waaowww!!Awesome!!Very exciting story,however a bit short.i cannot wait for a second chapter. tis story reminds me when at the age of 17,I fucked my married gorgeous mother's sister Helena,aged 39.We are still fucking 6 years afterwards but in total secrecy..However she cannot wait more than one week without my fucking her.On my request,she never wears panties when she comes at our place.Moreover,I have 20 of her dirty strings,of different colours,which I smell when wanking at home.Several of them have no smell,so much I have tasted her pussy's smell.

I went to a JR college were many almost nuns came to decide if they wanted to continue thier studies. About 50% also wanted to get fucked as often as possible before they gave it all up. Some gave BJs to as many guys as they could each week night in sorority house spare room. Guys would drop by before a date to get sucked off and 2 of them would take turns. After 1 semester 4 went back to the nunnery 1 stayed in school and became just another student and the last one kept on having sex with anyone that wanted to play with her other girls included. Lost touch after I graduated. Always wondered where she ended up.

It was pulsatingly erotic and gorgeously filthy, I masturbated until I was red raw.

Awesome story man. Can you write a continuation to it.