All Comments on 'Family Holliday'

OK Now let's go

More please !

I agree, more of this storyline. Please. Your writing is quite good.

This was very good. Looking forward to see what'll happen next.

Its great to see the sister take hold of the situation, lets hope the next chapter has her doing the same and enjoying a week of her brothers meat.

If only all sisters were like this!

I am as hard as Jack

A very good story but I feel it was rushed, I'd have preferred a slow build up, maybe with both just wearing underwear for the first day and nothing erotic happening until the second day. I really enjoyed the story though, it got me hard.

I agree that it felt rushed. A nice slow build up would have been really nice, but I still enjoyed the story and am looking forward to the next chapter.

Yes, slow start but excellent writing and a great ending ... I think Jack and Megan have a chance to screw each other all week and should after their mutual face to face masturbation !! I think she wants it and he will follow. Cannot wait until the next chapter, thank you.

Isn't there a male in these stories that's not hung like a horse? Really not a story criticism, but when every story has a male with an eight plus inch cock, it is not believable.

You need to do far more than just TALK! You need to get busy and write another chapter!

Waiting for next chapter. Thanks

So far the story is looking good. I kinda want to know more about the characters besides their physical characteristics and the fact that they are brother and sister. Looking forward to the next part!

but hated the ending

Must be very big rucksacks to fit a tent or tents, presumably sleeping bags, chairs, food for two for a week, cooking gears well as clothes etc. Two of them carried all this through forest without any trail to follow and just happened to arrive at a clearing with a convenient swimming place and water supply and mobile phone reception! Wow!

Have her insert a twig up his ass and masturbate him using freshly squeezed skunk oil.

you got it right there...take us to the romance too

Can't wait to read more

This story was very good I can't wait to read what happens between them

When does the next part come out? I can't wait to read it!!

Really hot beginning! Can't wait for more!

Some of our Literotica writers have been known to disappear, for reasons unknown, and never complete their stories. Please don't be one of them! Make a little time to continue your tale, and let us know what becomes of Jack and Megan. I'm hoping for

a long-term incestuous romance.

I'm thinking that they used to be very close when they were younger, but found that puberty forced them to be more other siblings. Perhaps each had always wished that the two of them could be close again, and this camping trip gave them a chance to be each other's favorite person again.

When will there be a part 2 or continuation?

Fantastic start of a story, but that's all it is for now: the beginning.

I think it could develop into an amazing story, but in order for that to happen, you need more chapters.

I WISH YOU WERE STILL ACTIVE. I LOVED YOU STORY!

Too short, lol

Good start to a sexy encounter.

That’s sexy af. I want more.