Another great high school author.
It's not "Me and my Mother," it's, "My Mother and I." The other person first, ALWAYS.
Capitalizing important words like Drinks, and Beer. I know, I know, the capitalized words are a code for someone. Cute, but not really.
The way you tell this story, you don't, "take stock," you, "took stock."
Crappy story, get's you a minus 7. Minus 8 if you're ESL.
English
Hot story
Nice work, hope you keep it up.
Creped?
You pancaked out of the closet? LOL
Party Mom
Another great high school author.
It's not "Me and my Mother," it's, "My Mother and I." The other person first, ALWAYS.
Capitalizing important words like Drinks, and Beer. I know, I know, the capitalized words are a code for someone. Cute, but not really.
The way you tell this story, you don't, "take stock," you, "took stock."
Crappy story, get's you a minus 7. Minus 8 if you're ESL.
Practically Unreadable
Resubmit this in English.
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