Was her ass actually virginal or 'like' viginal? Two fingers and a spot of lotion? Seems rushed and inadequate, even if she's a masochist. The anal part needed a bit more description because having questions takes the reader out of the story. Other than that it was good in its simplicity and directness.
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Was her ass actually virginal or 'like' viginal? Two fingers and a spot of lotion? Seems rushed and inadequate, even if she's a masochist. The anal part needed a bit more description because having questions takes the reader out of the story. Other than that it was good in its simplicity and directness.
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