All Comments on 'What a Fucking Girl'

You over use this: '...', sometimes its just '..' I'm sorry but I was over that really quickly and didn't finish your story. I wish you luck in future writing.

This is meant to be a romantic story - not a schoolboy's idea of a sex story! Why spoil it with the unnecessary use of the 'F' word so often. I may be from the older generation who have never used that word so openly and often - I feel I have enough education to use other words to attain the same effect - so why do you feel that you have to liberally sprinkle it around like confetti at a wedding. I ask you - do you use that word in front of your mother - if not - why do you feel you have to use it in front of me?

Great story! This is exactly the type of story I like, maybe a little more of an ending? But other than that it was fantastic. Keep up the good writing!

Hi guys,

Please let me know in the comments if you would like me to write more. If people aren't asking me to write more, I probably won't bother so if you want more, let me know via the comments!

~ TheStarryEyedDreamer

You have to finish this! Thanks.....

Damned right we want more.

More more more

Nice.... More...

Hi guys,

I will write more soon-ish but I can't promise you how soon as I am currently overseas and very busy. I am in the middle of writing another story on here also - The Minister - so I will probably finish this after that series is done. Thanks for all your interest!!

TheStarryEyedDreamer

Hoping for more! This is an awesome story and I do hope there's more to the story of Iz & Noah :)

Hugs

You ruined the ending

This in no way is a romance. This story is about nothing but lust, sex, and people using other people.

Sweet peas, I promise it will develop into a romance story. I will admit I got bored of the story and started writing another one but I am going to restart it and you will see it bloom into the romance I always planned it to be.

Thanks xoxo

Good story!

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The story portrays fatal attraction very well.

It's a shame we haven't had a sequel yet.

please do a sequel, this was amazing