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Big Sister at the Cabin Pt. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/29/16

You can do very much now that the aunt is on the boat as well, make it a free-for-all orgy, make it a lesbian orgy for Jakes pleasure, make it a reverse gangbang, or go completely off and have Jake denounce sex with other for his lovely big sis. The possibilities are endless.

4*

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by Anonymous07/29/16

Utter garbage

Totally stupid premise and a ridiculous situation. Totally unbelievable. I spurted when the aunty made him spurt. Naturally, you get 5 starts again...

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by Anonymous07/29/16

Yes, my first time reading your story and it was great. Maybe, all the girls can work on Jack and the one who gets him ready to cum can have him all to their self for the whole day; in any way they wish ?? I'd like to see something like maybe all the girls work a day before getting Jake really hydrated, worked up by keeping him aroused and then they decide who gets him for that night to do him hard. A group project with everyone getting an all night turn with him. Thank you.

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by red7105407/29/16

There is a lot left to go. Jake has fucked his sister and Riley. He's got a blow job from his sister and auntie. So far he hasn't touched Rachael it's only fair that she gets in on the action. So many ways to go. All need to be fucked, all need to be licked. Damn I hope they are at that cabin a long time. lol.

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by spankfunfor07/30/16

Great Sex!

Much More Fucking, Every Combination; Including, Orgies! Hopefully Your Just Kidding and Won't End Your Story Here!

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by Anonymous07/30/16

Wonderful Story

You could continue and make the four ladies could all play together and take turns pleasuring Jake and him pleasuring them. Sort of his own little harem in the cabin.

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by Anonymous07/30/16

Great story as always

Keep the story going and have all five of them fuck in every room of the cabin and have Janine eat Riley, Rachel, and Alice out while Jake is either watching in his own or they have him tied to a chair and they torture him into watching and then all four ladies take turns fucking him

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by Anonymous07/30/16

Only one page? You couldn't think of more.. you have a guy and 4 females in a cabin. There's a huge amount of options.

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by Anonymous08/02/16

Nice

First time reading this seems pretty nice but you couldn't just have a gang bang. That would have been a lot better.

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by Anonymous12/14/16

Ideas

Have the aunt called away for work then have them play like truth or dare or have them tease each other have them make a bet between the girls ( they can't tell jake about the bet though to keep it fair ) whoever can get him to Make love to a pillow pretending it's his favorite actress and he has to describe while he's doing it all the naughty things he would do to her hot body in front of all of them, the second task could be get him to eat his own cum from one of their pussies, the third could be get him to wear only a pair of their panties around all day no matter if they are inside all day or go hiking or swimming at the lake the panties are the only thing he can wear all day. Who ever gets him to do all these things first wins and they get to fuck jake where ever they want for as long as they want in what ever position they want for 48 hours and the two losers can mastrobate but aren't allowed to cum in those 48 hours then when the 48 hours are over the two losers have to get naked and go skinny dipping in the lake and finger each other to orgasm before they can get out of the water also they have to be jakes and the winners sex slaves for a week and do what ever they say and also again they can play with themselves but they can't cum for the whole week 😈

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by kaidman01/02/17

dynamite work

loved your stories keep them up there's many places you can go with this one I feel like you have at least two more chapters to go with how it is set up like maybe him hooking up with the aunt next and then a big group thing with the five of them and then a wrap up chapter to tie up the main story between the siblings since it feels like they are going to be spending a lot more time together and how far you take them is up to you also ignore the comments about length of story the single page on the site is about equal to 7-10 pages in word I've read short stories like about as long as half this chapter and I have read super long stories like as long as 30 of the sites pages and you have quality work

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