All Comments on 'September in a Small Town'

I like the way you've taken this subject--which could be stated pretty plainly--but given it a nice balance of clarity and delicacy--the image works well, but isn't overpowering--in my opinion, a very good thing! :)

A soft gentle roll in the hay,

but it is barely spring.

The meadow grass is not yet grown,

and never mown.

Go give it a roll.