All Comments on 'Applicable'

I read this several times, once out loud - and it has such promise. Some of the lines verge on the brilliant and then it slips into the mundane. There's some great alliteration and clever rhyming but I think it could be tightened up. I like your work, keep writing.

Rhyming pretty good

Meter's a bit ragged

Alliteration saves the day

Makes you want to sing it.

Rhyming pretty good

Meter's a bit ragged

Alliteration saves the day

Makes you want to sing it.

Yep! He did get 'hold of something to run with' ~ this poem.