Doormouse you are an extremely talented writer. I have enjoyed reading your stories and look forward to reading many more. Your writing has a professional flow about it, I can imagine seeing your work made into a movie. Thankyou for sharing your great talent and obvious love of writing.
Reading this makes me realize how much work I need to do on my own stuff. Excellent descriptions, a sweet story, and real characters. Thoroughly delicious.
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Hot and spicy
Doormouse you are an extremely talented writer. I have enjoyed reading your stories and look forward to reading many more. Your writing has a professional flow about it, I can imagine seeing your work made into a movie. Thankyou for sharing your great talent and obvious love of writing.
Very nice...
This story was a great example of a good writer. I love to read stories such as this from a woman's stand point. Wonderfully done...
Slicing through...
I enjoyed the description of the work as well as the rest of the story. I felt I was there at that counter.
I wish my "first story" was as good as this!
delightful imagery, love this story!
I'll never be the same
Reading this makes me realize how much work I need to do on my own stuff. Excellent descriptions, a sweet story, and real characters. Thoroughly delicious.
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