All Comments on 'Here's to You Mrs. Robinson'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
If wishes were fishes

Oh, god....That was incredible. If only some of MY son's friends would get the drift.

aacoolaacoolalmost 20 years ago
sensuous

That was a great story - the build up was wonderful, especially the innocence that is initially expressed by the two virile young men, and the reluctant desire expressed by the woman. Who knows what lies ahead for her and the new awakening she has had

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Rushed

That was a really great build up but then you rushed it to the end..left out to many of the good detials you started with perhaps you should have xepanded and gone for a part 2?

erick24601erick24601almost 20 years ago
to be continued?

I agree with one of the previous comments. It could have been longer. I really hope those two guys can fuck her more.Just don't let them loose their youthful niceness. That is what makes the story so good. That these two are gentle and loving with her.They don't just use and abuse her they want to make her feel good as well. It is also advantageous that you write from the point of view of the woman.This story has more the feel of a Felini movie that a Skinemax one..a rare find on here

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I wasn't optimistic so it was a nice surprise.

Not a fan of rape and it's tough to know the line.

Technically ally I think this was rape, but all partiest benefited and seemed happy at the end.

It was a turn on.

Thank you

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