All Comments on 'After the Morning After Pill'

by peterswiftt

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Red48beardRed48beardover 7 years ago
story is a five, but.....

Spell check is eating you alive ..... soar? for sore,

i notice you used the idea from Part 1, and made the story even better....now

where does it go, perhaps the wives put the potion in the bourbon glasses and invite the Ladies Auxiliary over?

good work

impo_61impo_61over 7 years ago
I didn't liked the first part...

I didn't liked the first part...It's impossible to not being rape...In this part the wives took advantage of knowing about it...It's normal for a woman know she was raped and still be good with it? Now it was the time for the wives to have some kind of "revenge"...After all they have found out that they had no self-respect and didn't need any pills to be ready to whore themselves...2*

marcus48marcus48almost 7 years ago
Spelling

Fun story , nice idea , but in this day and age a spell checker would improve your writing . I' m sure you meant Kyle to say "will do " not we'll do .

There are so many errors , and as good as your story is , your spelling is spoiling it for your readers.

Do you read them before you upload ?

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 6 years ago
yes, Peter..

...you need and editor.

IFAFILHGIFAFILHGalmost 3 years ago

Super hot erotic story.. wives had a cool plan.. glad it worked...don't worry about spell check

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