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by YDD04/21/04

throne-like verses

I like the playfulness in the title,
and can see how it sews a common theme through the poem.

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by Anonymous04/21/04

okay YDD help me I don't get the yogurt reference!

"hats and gloves optional
under garments optional"

Does that mean pants are mandatory?
just take a look at that ice sculpture
shirt soaked beyond pits

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