All Comments on 'Arian's Pool Ch. 01'

You might have to change the ending of your book, single girl meets a friend.

So is Mike naked, I (my)wood be, third times a charm when it cums to clothing by the swimin hole!

There's more chapters, thought 1st ch. was in new stories. Cool.

Nice story by the way.

Such a contrast from the City to the sparsity of Wales. The complications of a stressful divorce to the solitude of her (nearly) private woods.

Benny needs a stern talking to for not alerting her to the presence of another at the pool.

It's really good to see a story from a writer who is literate and writes in English!

It's also good that there is no attempt to tailor the story for other country's readers, with irritating explanations, in parentheses, about different word use in the land where English, as she is spoke, originated!!

Please write more romances. You have great skill in them. Although I didn't know you could get BT and Sky at the same time.