Road Trip Ch. 02

WOW i love this story

its a little too fast for my liking but still great 5 stars

"This is about love and romance. It's not a quick 'fuck and go' story."

1 page. LOL

Semed a lot longer at the time :-)

Yeah, when I see it on the page, it seems a lot shorter than it did when I wrote it.

page count

Between six and ten pages on a word program will end up as one page on Lit.
This catches a lot of writers new to Lit.

Well, at least you didn't call it a novel.

Great story!

Like the others have mentioned, I wished it had been longer. And I would have wanted to read more about Jim giving Sharon the ring. But the ending is very, very promising. I hope a baby is on the way!

PS. One page on Lit is about 3,500 words.

Thanks!

Thanks, doug, for the kind words. I've been thinking about the conclusion and hope to start writing soon.

Good Read****

Hot and entertaining story. Thanks for sharing.