All Comments on 'I like big dicks'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Timing is a thing

I think its idea is good and the rhymes are ok. It has very off timing which makes it disjointed to read, I think if you took more time with it and really tried to get it right, it could have been a lot better, I encourage you to continue writing in the future and improve your technique. Despite the lack of technique however, I did find it amusing and fun to read.

tazz317tazz317over 7 years ago
THE METER ON THIS POEM

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William smythWilliam smythover 7 years ago
Literary Erotica

Isn't that what Literotica stands for ? Well I'm ignoring the Literary aspect and giving this poem a 5 for Eroticism.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
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