Perfect Italian romance continues with a more serious note
And it's that serious note that makes all the difference, it gives the story credibility and actual basis for the long haul. The sex, both the sweet and the needy kind, are cool on its own but it's the reason and the circumstances that make it so much more rewarding. I have to agree with Anne and he logic, she made some very strong points considering their relationship. And seeing how things are going between them I bet they'll end up in that church in less than a year, they really are made for each other.
As always giving a 5* and anxiously awaiting more.
P.S. Just how much of this story was inspired by your vacation?
The places are all real, and were places I've been. That's true in just about all of my writing, and I can mentally place myself in those places and those times as I write.
And Anne is a fictitious personality, but was inspired by a real woman I saw, exactly as described, on exactly the tour described in the first chapter.
There's a big, big issue in the offing, rolling around in my mind, but I haven't figured out how to write it yet. And a completely new story begins tomorrow, kind of inspired by some of the stuff in the Loving Wives category, but it'll appear in the Romance section; it's already been approved and scheduled.
I was only asking out of curiosity since I know all of those places both personal visits and books that led me on those visits. You descriptions and fascination with them was so great I was willing to bet it wasn't just some brochure research that fuelled the scenery.
For the new story I just hope it wasn't too inspired by the LW category, some of the stuff there can be downright volatile. Sure some authors juggle LW & romance quite well but those cases are rarer than diamonds so I hope you'll do good on it.
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Perfect Italian romance continues with a more serious note
And it's that serious note that makes all the difference, it gives the story credibility and actual basis for the long haul. The sex, both the sweet and the needy kind, are cool on its own but it's the reason and the circumstances that make it so much more rewarding. I have to agree with Anne and he logic, she made some very strong points considering their relationship. And seeing how things are going between them I bet they'll end up in that church in less than a year, they really are made for each other.
As always giving a 5* and anxiously awaiting more.
P.S. Just how much of this story was inspired by your vacation?
How much was inspired by my vacation?
The places are all real, and were places I've been. That's true in just about all of my writing, and I can mentally place myself in those places and those times as I write.
And Anne is a fictitious personality, but was inspired by a real woman I saw, exactly as described, on exactly the tour described in the first chapter.
There's a big, big issue in the offing, rolling around in my mind, but I haven't figured out how to write it yet. And a completely new story begins tomorrow, kind of inspired by some of the stuff in the Loving Wives category, but it'll appear in the Romance section; it's already been approved and scheduled.
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I was only asking out of curiosity since I know all of those places both personal visits and books that led me on those visits. You descriptions and fascination with them was so great I was willing to bet it wasn't just some brochure research that fuelled the scenery.
For the new story I just hope it wasn't too inspired by the LW category, some of the stuff there can be downright volatile. Sure some authors juggle LW & romance quite well but those cases are rarer than diamonds so I hope you'll do good on it.
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