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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/02/16

octo love

weird but a pretty good story. ready to read some more.

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by Anonymous08/03/16

Pretty Good

The grammar issues were a bit distracting, but the amount of the story left to the imagination is a near-perfect Balance between it being non-descriptive and defined.

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by The_Defective_Pawn08/05/16

Excellent flow

Your choice words were exquisite and measured, with each movement from one thing happening to another being equally so. Honestly, you have given me a good bit to learn on writing not for distance, but for detail.

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