Sorry! Another one trying to get the Oscar for the worst story in LW!
Sorry! Another one trying to get the Oscar for the worst story in LW! 1st - Another city without police! 2nd - What kind of love has this low man for his wife? 3rd - She was "a little tipsy" or in a "a drunken daze"? 4th - She was so drunk that she didn't remembered a thing next day? Really? 5th - For a repeat he just had to be sure she got a "little tipsy", no need to tell her what happened!! Because if she is a real woman, she for sure will divorce him! 1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)
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Anonymous08/02/16
Absolute crap
0 from 5
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Anonymous08/02/16
brain dead characters
I do believe that all the characters in this'story' have single digit IQs.
It was a complete waste of the readers time because it was so poorly written.
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Anonymous08/02/16
It ended for us real men
When like a sick puppy you got in the car and followed her instead of saying so long bitch you're on your own from here on out.
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Anonymous08/02/16
Actually, author has an IQ of 0 to 5.
Typical LW trash.
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Anonymous08/02/16
Shes so drunk she has no idea whats happening?
The fuck is wrong you? How can she fuck a dozen guys in a few hours and he does nothi ng but get his jollies off watched ng his wife get raped? Because if she was that drunk that she didnt know what was going on, then either she was drugged or so intoxocated she had alcohol poisoning.
The author is so fucking stupid he shouldn't be allowed to write a grocery list.
This was a fun little cuck story for those of us who like to read this sort of thing and are not ashamed of ourselves afterwards.
As for constructive comments, you should probably get an editor. The paragraph structure seemed too disjointed. I realize that this was sort of a "flash" story, but more backstory would be nice, too.
Just for those that think fucking a drunk wife is fun,it isn't,they tend to get sick all over you, themself and theyr suroundings like a bed
If she is actually to drunk to know what is happening then it's RAPE pure and simple,remember the student who tried to fuck a girl behind a dumpster some time ago ? he got jailtime for rape
OK, uncomplicated, etc. I do wonder why anyone black or partially black has a big or partially big dick. Never true of other crude, animal races, like spics, kikes, wops, dagoes, micks, polacks, gringoes, etc? A mere literary convention?
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Anonymous08/02/16
Wow you are the man.
I mean how cool was that, letting some asshole fuck your wife your soulmate bareback in front of a bunch of other assholes, sure sounds cool to me. Did you jack off writing this awesome story?
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Anonymous01/11/17
Some story
Hubby watched all this and wants to seeher do it again....wow!!
English
Cuck Sh*t
Yuck What Cusk Sh*t
Sorry! Another one trying to get the Oscar for the worst story in LW!
Sorry! Another one trying to get the Oscar for the worst story in LW! 1st - Another city without police! 2nd - What kind of love has this low man for his wife? 3rd - She was "a little tipsy" or in a "a drunken daze"? 4th - She was so drunk that she didn't remembered a thing next day? Really? 5th - For a repeat he just had to be sure she got a "little tipsy", no need to tell her what happened!! Because if she is a real woman, she for sure will divorce him! 1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)
Absolute crap
0 from 5
brain dead characters
I do believe that all the characters in this'story' have single digit IQs.
It was a complete waste of the readers time because it was so poorly written.
It ended for us real men
When like a sick puppy you got in the car and followed her instead of saying so long bitch you're on your own from here on out.
Actually, author has an IQ of 0 to 5.
Typical LW trash.
Shes so drunk she has no idea whats happening?
The fuck is wrong you? How can she fuck a dozen guys in a few hours and he does nothi ng but get his jollies off watched ng his wife get raped? Because if she was that drunk that she didnt know what was going on, then either she was drugged or so intoxocated she had alcohol poisoning.
The author is so fucking stupid he shouldn't be allowed to write a grocery list.
Why did you write this crap!
call this pathetic story from a sick individual
5
good LW story
Fun little story
This was a fun little cuck story for those of us who like to read this sort of thing and are not ashamed of ourselves afterwards.
As for constructive comments, you should probably get an editor. The paragraph structure seemed too disjointed. I realize that this was sort of a "flash" story, but more backstory would be nice, too.
All-in-all, not a bad first effort. Keep it up.
Drunk wife or woman
Just for those that think fucking a drunk wife is fun,it isn't,they tend to get sick all over you, themself and theyr suroundings like a bed
If she is actually to drunk to know what is happening then it's RAPE pure and simple,remember the student who tried to fuck a girl behind a dumpster some time ago ? he got jailtime for rape
Ugh!
'Nuff said.
I'm with CHL88
OK, uncomplicated, etc. I do wonder why anyone black or partially black has a big or partially big dick. Never true of other crude, animal races, like spics, kikes, wops, dagoes, micks, polacks, gringoes, etc? A mere literary convention?
Wow you are the man.
I mean how cool was that, letting some asshole fuck your wife your soulmate bareback in front of a bunch of other assholes, sure sounds cool to me. Did you jack off writing this awesome story?
Some story
Hubby watched all this and wants to seeher do it again....wow!!
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