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Everyday Screw: The Burger Girl

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/28/04

nicely done

well written. Erotic with a nice twist at the end.

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by Looney04/28/04

very good

lol, great story. good writing and something that hopefully, really happened

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by Anonymous04/28/04

good story

good and sexy story with a good twist at the end. Next time the guy should have sex with the mother and daughter at the burger place and turn the loud speaker up real high so the customers can hear all their sexy moans. who knows it could turn into a real orgy that way!!!

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by mcfbridge05/04/04

Very Hot

Loved the story. I may never look at fast food again. Would love to read the story where the guy actually knocks on their door.

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by sack12/07/04

Redefining fast food.....

Great "stroke story"....keep up the good work!!

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by LadyJeanne12/13/04

Delicious!

Fast paced, great dialogue, and strong, hungry characters - love it!

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by Anonymous05/30/15

Bravo!

You are a good writer!

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