Swapping from first person (I, Jenn) to second person (I, you) constantly killed the mood. Pick a perspective and stick with it.
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Anonymous08/02/16
Persoective
For fucks sake edit this POS
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Anonymous08/02/16
Great!
Especially when she shoved 50 pipe cleaners and Grandmas toothbrush up his ass and sliced his cock off with a razor. Bloid gushed and he screamed. Then she slowly chewed his balls off and unleashed a torrent of dark red blood onto Grandpas cute little belly button. Grandma moaned and bit off her own wrinkled nipples.
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Anonymous08/02/16
Yawn
Well that was a waste of time
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Anonymous08/04/16
success
You have finally proven to all of us that Neanderthal man still lives among us...and the room temperature I.Q. didn't hurt either.
..."pronunciates"...really...? GTFOH
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Anonymous08/05/16
Jenn and you.
As in, Jenn is a person and you would refer to another person. Please PROOFREAD kid.
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Anonymous08/06/16
POV????
Well at least I wasn't the only one thrown off and lost interest due to the switch ha,k and forth of point of view... seriously get an editor bro...
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Anonymous08/21/16
between you and the car.
Why. Would you have her between you and the car. Didn't you have a key to open a door and set in the car seat? I would say you will never get your dick near her mouth again.
Speaking of stupid I was watching Hilary Clinton presidential candidate on TV acting anal. I entered it on my smart phone. The video that came up I would say if she had as many prick's sticking out of her as she had sticking in her she would look like a porcupine and none of them were Bill. I can't believe all the searching the internet for the sites not to be found.
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Anonymous08/22/16
Damn
Great now I want to have sex with my cousin so bad
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Anonymous12/30/16
a blow job???
i've NEVER had a blow job that was even in the ball park of pussy. this complete idiot can only think of a fucking blow job? what a jerk...
English
Pick a perspective
Swapping from first person (I, Jenn) to second person (I, you) constantly killed the mood. Pick a perspective and stick with it.
Persoective
For fucks sake edit this POS
Great!
Especially when she shoved 50 pipe cleaners and Grandmas toothbrush up his ass and sliced his cock off with a razor. Bloid gushed and he screamed. Then she slowly chewed his balls off and unleashed a torrent of dark red blood onto Grandpas cute little belly button. Grandma moaned and bit off her own wrinkled nipples.
Yawn
Well that was a waste of time
success
You have finally proven to all of us that Neanderthal man still lives among us...and the room temperature I.Q. didn't hurt either.
..."pronunciates"...really...? GTFOH
Jenn and you.
As in, Jenn is a person and you would refer to another person. Please PROOFREAD kid.
POV????
Well at least I wasn't the only one thrown off and lost interest due to the switch ha,k and forth of point of view... seriously get an editor bro...
between you and the car.
Why. Would you have her between you and the car. Didn't you have a key to open a door and set in the car seat? I would say you will never get your dick near her mouth again.
Speaking of stupid I was watching Hilary Clinton presidential candidate on TV acting anal. I entered it on my smart phone. The video that came up I would say if she had as many prick's sticking out of her as she had sticking in her she would look like a porcupine and none of them were Bill. I can't believe all the searching the internet for the sites not to be found.
Damn
Great now I want to have sex with my cousin so bad
a blow job???
i've NEVER had a blow job that was even in the ball park of pussy. this complete idiot can only think of a fucking blow job? what a jerk...
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