It has some trifling issues, but on the whole its better than most. It says to me you'll likely become one of the better writers in these parts.
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Anonymous09/02/16
Oh yeah ...
Oh yeah -- been there done that but kicked her out finally as she ate crackers in my bed.! LOL
Good little tale of two lonely people wanting to get boned but with no final yes I do's..!
"5" and looking for more.!*****
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It gets 5 stars from me
It has some trifling issues, but on the whole its better than most. It says to me you'll likely become one of the better writers in these parts.
Oh yeah ...
Oh yeah -- been there done that but kicked her out finally as she ate crackers in my bed.! LOL
Good little tale of two lonely people wanting to get boned but with no final yes I do's..!
"5" and looking for more.!*****
Loved it
Very sweet and romantic. Keep going!
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