All Comments on 'The Rape'

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SEX_VAMPYRESEX_VAMPYREalmost 20 years ago
I sexy story.

I'm glad no one was hurt in your story.Please write more.BTW none of your ICQ, AOL, MSN contacts seem to work.

You can read my own sex stories http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=47506

SEX_VAMPYRE

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Pretty good story.

I only had one minor problem with it. You mention her getting her hands tied behind her back, then you mention her catching herself with her hands on the lawn, but you never mentioned her hands getting untied. So, if he didn’t untie her and she couldn’t untie herself, how did she have her hands free to catch herself?

Other than that one slight error, I did think it was a good story!

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