This could of been a much better story, that is if the author thought about it more!
Please keep writing.
Good read. Hard to get past no quotation marks denoting conversation.
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Dull and lacluster
This could of been a much better story, that is if the author thought about it more!
Actually, I liked this story a lot!
Please keep writing.
Punctuation
Good read. Hard to get past no quotation marks denoting conversation.
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