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by Merrymaker04/23/04

Who could resist?

Wonderfully crafted....just love "where bedeviled dragons weep".
~Merry

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by Anonymous04/23/04

Bedeviled dragon eggs

You create some nice images
and the lite alliteration lets the phrasing flow.
I enjoyed the read.

edit:
"prophets" should be possessive.
Is "conjurored" supposed to be "conjured"?

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by Tathagata04/24/04

Wonderful

illustration of a magical world.
Nicely done
thank you

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by Angeline04/24/04

Terrific!

There's so much that's good about this poem--the rhythm works so well; the poem feels musical, the alliteration is great, and I just love the way you've carried the ocean imagery across the piece. Really nice!

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by Syndra Lynn04/24/04

Ooooh!

I don't understand all of it, but I love all of it! Thanks for the pretty words. I'll go read it again-

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