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by Anonymous

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by legerdemer08/03/16

Another lovely one

Do they go together, this and Ten twenty? They could, couldn't they?

This one also says much with few words. One extra, however, in the last line of the second stanza (how I hate when that happens) - but which is it, a or my?

Lovely!

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by UnderYourSpell08/04/16

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Love the last stanza, you naughty girl!

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by tazz31708/04/16

FOREPLAY.......

The Root of all Sexuality and Performance, TK U MLJ LV NV

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