All Comments on 'Demands on Him Ch. 04'

And just like that, this story joins all the other trashy ones on here. Broken trust and giving away a private scene is the worst thing an author can do. The fiancee is involved, so this was practically a round about way to a cuckold scenario story

Must agree with previous comment was going great but now that Jenna's part I will not be a part thank you for ruining a perfectly good story.

Have to agree with the previous commenters, this definitely ruined the story for me. Won't be reading further if you continue.

Agree with the previous comments. ..I was so excited to see a new instalment but completely disappointed ... You ruined what made this story one of my favorite on this website:(

Don't listen to them doll face. It was amazing! Now he can stop feeling guilty for fucking behind Jenna's back.

I hope there will be more!!!

Sorry some readers didn't like the twist in this chapter. I think it opens up an entirely new area for Will's submission. Keep it up!

Will should just dump Jenna and admit that he is gay. Of course, Todd just wants to fuck both of them.

and wish you would continue. I enjoy stories about "straight" men who get bent over and go gay. I'm double-hard if their sexual humiliation is witnessed by others - spouse, family, friends, coworkers.

Todd simply MUST take William away from Jenna, and Jenna away from William!

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It was reading as something special between the two of them, but you trashed it up. I'm out. Not reading anymore, so knock yourself out.

This story was so hot, I personally would have preferred the fiancee not be a part of it at all but I loved it regardless

That just raises so many questions. How long has she known? Has she been fucking his boss? How long? Before him? Before she knew him? That just makes it weirder.

Absolutely loved reading about will, wishing it was me in his place. I tossed off three times please write more about Will, Todd and Jenna.

I liked the story until you brought Jenna into it. I can fully understand why Will loves the attentions of his boss. I was straight as an arrow until I was 43 years old. Boy, was I surprised when I found out how wonderful gay sex is. That first night I gave bjs to 4 guys and the found that I also liked being fucked. Looking back on it, I truly feel I was probably gay all along but didn’t know it. I turned into a cum loving cock sucking fagot slut.uzgp

Delightful story. After turning to a cocksucking ass slut owned by a dom, it was such a surprise to see his Jenna there. I hope there is more and I can't imagine a more delighful transition. Waiting for more.

ma as well move into Todd's house and the 2 of you serve him