Not the worst but sure contests for the shortest, might wanna write a few chapters first and post them together. Things move fast and I hope it's going where I think it's going. 4* for now.
Hardly qualifies to be called incest/taboo. Daydreaming is not interesting.
What the hell is this shit? -.-
do you know the reason behind classification? do you know what the fuck incest is?
Until I jammed a pencil up my shit chute. The creamy crap is flowing into your mouth. Taste the goodness of Grandmas hemmoroids.
Guys this is just the first Chapter! No worries, Jet and Jenny will enjoy each other much more as the story progresses. I post it as I write it.
Chapters could do with being longer so there's more than just a minutes read.
Come con guys and gals give the author a chance. I am pretty sure in will have all the necessary bits to be in the incest area in the next chapter.
Why do people bother submitting pieces that are barely longer than the list of ingredients on a jar of jam? I've just re-read this, timing how "long" it took: 41 seconds certainly isn't much of a read!
Was that?
W.T.F. YOU HAVE GOT TO BE JOKING!
but please make first entries into a chapter based story longer than that.
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Not the worst but sure contests for the shortest, might wanna write a few chapters first and post them together. Things move fast and I hope it's going where I think it's going.
4* for now.
Don't much like "shorties"!
Hardly qualifies to be called incest/taboo. Daydreaming is not interesting.
what the hell
What the hell is this shit? -.-
uh...
do you know the reason behind classification? do you know what the fuck incest is?
Great!
Until I jammed a pencil up my shit chute. The creamy crap is flowing into your mouth. Taste the goodness of Grandmas hemmoroids.
More to come!
Guys this is just the first Chapter! No worries, Jet and Jenny will enjoy each other much more as the story progresses. I post it as I write it.
Chapters could do with being longer so there's more than just a minutes read.
Hey
Come con guys and gals give the author a chance. I am pretty sure in will have all the necessary bits to be in the incest area in the next chapter.
Why?
Why do people bother submitting pieces that are barely longer than the list of ingredients on a jar of jam?
I've just re-read this, timing how "long" it took: 41 seconds certainly isn't much of a read!
WTF
Was that?
WTF
W.T.F. YOU HAVE GOT TO BE JOKING!
It's a good start...
but please make first entries into a chapter based story longer than that.
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