All Comments on 'First Come'

....it's not over yet!

Great build up for part 2 ?

Would love to attend a party like that

Excellent story, can't wait for Part 2. Keep writing!

Good start, but...

"It was Ravel's Boléro, one of the longest and most passionate pieces of classical music ever written."

You don't know much about music. Boléro is nowhere near being one of the longest. In fact it is quite short, averaging 15 - 17 minutes depending on the performance. Whether it is one of the most passionate is subjective.

Ravel came to hate it.

You also say you visit the FF area then say you want to visit the FF area.

Great story! You have a vary vivid imagination. I hope a second part is fourth comming. please don't let any of the negtive asshole comments stop your writing

Amazing story. So hard while I read it

Very raunchy and erotic. Well written too, a cut above the average story. Nice touch was having Jill and Woody not jump into having sex with their mentors or anyone else. "Will they or won't they" made for some arousing plot tension. The grand finale was both sexy and funny, with all of the quickie descriptions of what felt like 100 porno movies going off at once....in Jill's words. Thanks for a first-rate, penis hardening tale with a favorite theme of mine.