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Hummingbird

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by Anonymous

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by Angeline08/07/16

This is lovely!

Can't believe I missed it on the forum (assuming it was ever there). Anyway, love the story which is so lovingly told of the close watch the narrator keeps on the little hummingbirds who turn out to not be as fragile as one would think. A thoroughly enjoyable read!

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by KatieJones08/07/16

This is so delicately written. Not a word out of place. I'm a fan.

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by UnderYourSpell08/08/16

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So vividly told! I wish we had hummingbirds here.

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by AMoveableBeast08/11/16

Really enjoyed this. Delicate and well-planned. Beautiful too.

I wrote a poem about a hummingbird myself, though of a different ilk.

Think I'll post it.

Look at that, free inspiration! Thanks.

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