All Comments on 'sending a strophe'

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YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Modern Poetry - straight words in a curved world

Transmitting highs by wire,

an excellent description of today's poet computer composing,

and what gets sent and what arrives on the reader's screen.

Fascinating choice of words.

This poet continue to grow and impress.

I like the concept and my favorite strophe is:

"somewhere

on a straight line

through a curved world

neatly folded cargo

will arrive unharmed

to spread on glass

what wrists bent

and fingers stretched

painted"

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
really good!

I hope you put some hard work into this poem and it didn't take shape too easily. What I'm really saying is that it's good and I'm envious. :)

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