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A Really Good Start
Very well written.
Your descriptions are accurate and sensitive.
Congratulations on a well written story.
This adventure will continue, won't it???
Again thank you for a really good story.
UnBeliveable!!
Please write more, The most moveing, passion, story i've Read in a long time. thank you
hot and sweet
It'd be interesting to read about further adventures here, past the first time.
VERY Good
That was one very good story, well done.
Classy
You really do write well.There is an economy about your writing which is very effective.I could feel the tension!
Well done.
I only had time to read your shortest submission, but it maintained a very nice composition from start to finish. I could instantly tell that the story was not entirely ficticious, and that touch of realism only further added to its appeal.
Found you!
Too hot. Oh, yes.
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