All Comments on 'Arian's Pool Ch. 03'

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mcollect over 7 years ago

I hate it

when you stop like that! Great story; can't wait for the next installment.

Anonymousover 7 years ago

Superb

Simply Superb !!

Anonymousover 7 years ago

Yes -- What's going on?

Well, I'd like to be optimistic and think that somehow Benny has found Mike, who can safely deliver our dear Maggie of her baby. Of course, there will be the question about where Mike has been, but I'd like to give him the benefit of the doubt and think he really DOES love her. Let him bring his "broad, defined chest" with the "rough hair" to the rescue. They belong together, and I always hope for the happy ending! Give Mike another chance with Maggie!

CarriedAway18 over 7 years ago

Great

This is probably the best story i have read. A continuation is necessary.

maddict over 7 years ago

Loving the mystery and Welsh lore. I hope everything comes out alright

rightbank almost 7 years ago

I wish we knew more of the Welch lore

That granny and the other keepers of the old ways could come teach her how to implement the rocks.

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