when you stop like that! Great story; can't wait for the next installment.
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Anonymous08/04/16
Superb
Simply Superb !!
by
Anonymous08/05/16
Yes -- What's going on?
Well, I'd like to be optimistic and think that somehow Benny has found Mike, who can safely deliver our dear Maggie of her baby. Of course, there will be the question about where Mike has been, but I'd like to give him the benefit of the doubt and think he really DOES love her. Let him bring his "broad, defined chest" with the "rough hair" to the rescue. They belong together, and I always hope for the happy ending! Give Mike another chance with Maggie!
English
I hate it
when you stop like that! Great story; can't wait for the next installment.
Superb
Simply Superb !!
Yes -- What's going on?
Well, I'd like to be optimistic and think that somehow Benny has found Mike, who can safely deliver our dear Maggie of her baby. Of course, there will be the question about where Mike has been, but I'd like to give him the benefit of the doubt and think he really DOES love her. Let him bring his "broad, defined chest" with the "rough hair" to the rescue. They belong together, and I always hope for the happy ending! Give Mike another chance with Maggie!
Great
This is probably the best story i have read. A continuation is necessary.
Loving the mystery and Welsh lore. I hope everything comes out alright
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