It was a good story, but you rushed it in the end, and then just left the story line hanging. But you are off to a good start.
I really liked this story. It was getting really hot towards the end when they're on the rock, but then when they have sex you sort of skip over it.
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good story line
It was a good story, but you rushed it in the end, and then just left the story line hanging. But you are off to a good start.
Pretty good
I really liked this story. It was getting really hot towards the end when they're on the rock, but then when they have sex you sort of skip over it.
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