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by YDD04/26/04

Love Letters

A simple poem of letters and lost love.
The words are basic as is the feeling.
The poem weakens when the rhythm of the meter stumbles.

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by WickedEve04/26/04

desk drawer

I think your first two stanzas are your strongest--the parts about your desk drawer and satchel of letters. I found it to be more substantial, something to sink my teeth into.

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