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A man's view
This story had a nice rhythm to it, and it definitely turned me on. As a man reading about women's sexuality with each other, I got a sense of authenticity from the author and my cock got very hard and stiff as I enjoyed the story.
meh
fluff, sorry , didnt do a thing for me. Also, from someone who is a randist, indicating that Pol Roger champagne is somehow good, much less served at an upscale restaurant makes no sense. In addition, adding Bananas Foster as dessert is true white trash pretending otherwise, such a bad cliche'. Mind you I had a hard time with the story after that.
Entertaining
Liked the pacing and the relative complexity of the characters emotions (considering the time you had to develop/display them). Easy to imagine this happening with the 'country club set'. Think I'll go back and find part 1.
next segment
what are the chances of Ann, Beth and Kari having a story together?
this story begs for more
This is a great "jilling" story. I loved both parts. But you brought beth into part two. You need to do at least another story and bring Beth into the group. Then maybe part 4 where beth finds a love of her own and gets a divorce. Please dont' stop here!
please more of Ann and Kari
The way you ended part two it seems as if Ann is in love as well as lust with Kari. This begs for Ann to leave her husband and move it with Kari. I would also like to see them involve Beth and Ann's first woman lover?
I liked a lot this story and it is so enjoyable reading it all the way through
Great story! The author did great with well written, nice context and quite hot & sexy story.
As a happy married woman with two kids I can tell you that I can see this kind of story happening with me. I really enjoy reading this set of story!
pretty good story
I hope there is a part 3 and yes I believe Ann was jealous of Beth trying to get into Kari panties, that should be part 3
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