All Comments on 'C.A.T.: Initiation Ch. 04'

It is a good story so far but it's getting irritating with how short you're making each chapter.

Cut him a brake buddy , hes doing it so we dont have to wait forever to get the next part for like a week, , so its short and that means we get sometging every day almost. But brilliant story , thanks for the continued writing.

Wait a week and read several at once. The author shouldn't have to control your impluses.

With each submission.

Can't wait for the next one!

I'll say it again. TO DAM SHORT.

Thank you for dialing back her level of bat-shit-crazy, she is now MUCH easier to accept as a character. The POSSIBLE premise that (in a universe where genetic modification exists) HER specific feline genome has an instinctive (and potentially inevitable/insurmountable) NEED to be with HIS specific feline genome, and that she is legitimately worried about the repercussions to him if/when their superiors find out about THEM, is a fully functioning plot device. Thank you for suggesting a possible fundamental backdrop for her personality that justifies her actions in earlier chapters.

Nice work.

I though length was fine, shorter stories to allow quicker posts works for me

God I was so sad when there are only 4. These are an awesome read. Please put more. I can't wait for the next part.

CudgelFace, have you stopped writing? Its been like forever .

Love the heat and passion and one commenters genetic imperatives theory

for their attraction and ad even more back story on dead brother her possible ex-lover / heat/ Friends with benefits keep it coming make this more than what she had with brother.

I came across this little gem of a story. Good characters, well written and enough sense of fun to not be a chore to read. Great little quirks and well thought out, and a believable alternate universe with a vibrant backdrop. Would like to hear what’s going to happen next. Keep them coming (in more ways than one!!)

I hope so...

I just realized that it's been more than a month since last post I read this yesterday and really was hoping for more ..... I hope you didn't stop this for ever :/ it was really great

Out of all the stories on this site this is the series iv enjoyed reading, I beg of you please continue it's such an enjoyable read.

Don't make me get on my knees and beg for more....

Shit is going ti hit he fan.