Get the feeling that Androgynousother is a bit of a hopeless romantic as well as being an excellent writer! 5*!
A very enjoyable read. I really like your writing. Some minor typos that could be caught with a proof reading. 5 well deserved stars.
and I also couldn't help but recite this with a welsh accent! (said in a welsh accent!) Just lovely...;)
I'm so happy Mike returned -- sexy Mike with the "rough, coarse" chest hair. Maybe another baby? Certainly lots of sex! Loved the story!
5*
Location location location, first rule of real estate, and love stories to. Having coffee in our city backyard just won't be the same.
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Another smart but still sweet story...
Get the feeling that Androgynousother is a bit of a hopeless romantic as well as being an excellent writer! 5*!
Wonderful Story
A very enjoyable read. I really like your writing. Some minor typos that could be caught with a proof reading. 5 well deserved stars.
I loved this story
and I also couldn't help but recite this with a welsh accent! (said in a welsh accent!)
Just lovely...;)
So glad Mike is back!
I'm so happy Mike returned -- sexy Mike with the "rough, coarse" chest hair. Maybe another baby? Certainly lots of sex! Loved the story!
Thank you
5*
A wonderful story
Location location location, first rule of real estate, and love stories to. Having coffee in our city backyard just won't be the same.
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Back to Arian's Pool Ch. 04 or
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