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The Best Birthday

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/18/16

Cute story

I liked your story but found the switching from first to third person a bit disconcerting.
Thanks.

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by WatcherRob11/19/16

Wonderful but

It was a wonderful story even it was a little cumbersome reading.

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