All Comments on 'Dinner Guest'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
A few typos and strange use tense change

But, it made me read till the end of the tail.

That doesn't happen very often.

doormousedoormousealmost 20 years ago
Wow!!!!

I almost stopped reading when the blade came out, but I'm glad I didn't!!

Well written and one that grabs the reader from start to finish!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Nice to see another demon get's their thrill

Not bad but coulda put more into it. If we were to meet, my form is one many have seen, one lived through the eating of her neck(thought I got the juggular and obviously that wasnt the case and the move and the faking of my death was a lesson well learned so i dont make that mistake again)but only one lived to tell about and she later was put in a mental hospital..Guess it isnt easy to watch a man transform into a beast..Humans are such stupid creatures while others such as ourselves at least know our intellectual integrity.

angelx602angelx602over 18 years ago
horror stories

Are great! I loved this one, great imagination.

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