Decent. Potential series. but the whole calling her "moms" was just off for some reason. Gave it a five nevertheless
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Anonymous08/12/16
Way too many "Moms"
Decent story
by
Anonymous08/12/16
Switched location mid story
You started out at the MILs place but ended at the sons place. But if a mistake there. Just FYI
by
Anonymous08/14/16
wonderful
A delightful story. But don't leave me hanging... another chapter or 2 please!!
by
Anonymous08/14/16
INFORMATION TO ANONYMOUS
The fucking was on his wife's bed at his mother in law's house. It was the wife's/her old bed in another words. The story was rushed at the end, it was a 4.
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Anonymous08/19/16
Clunk...
Clunk.
CLUNK.
CLUNK!!!!
Either English as a Second Language... or just plain bad writing.
English
Decent. Potential series. but the whole calling her "moms" was just off for some reason. Gave it a five nevertheless
Way too many "Moms"
Decent story
Switched location mid story
You started out at the MILs place but ended at the sons place. But if a mistake there. Just FYI
wonderful
A delightful story. But don't leave me hanging... another chapter or 2 please!!
INFORMATION TO ANONYMOUS
The fucking was on his wife's bed at his mother in law's house. It was the wife's/her old bed in another words. The story was rushed at the end, it was a 4.
Clunk...
Clunk.
CLUNK.
CLUNK!!!!
Either English as a Second Language... or just plain bad writing.
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