Great story, lead was Chris in pt1, but Craig in pt2
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Anonymous08/11/16
Chris & Craig
For those puzzled over the name change.
Chris was the virgin name, but once he was a virgin no more he got transformed into this fuck machine known as Craig. It's kinda like Jekyll & Hyde, except he can't turn back to the timid self anymore. Eventually with enough experience he could earn a first name of Daniel and then fill the shoes of James Bond, after all he is the ultimate chick magnet.
I’ll hold my hands up on this one, I totally dropped the ball on the Chris/Craig name thing! Just typical, you spend five months writing and editing a story, but fail to spot you’ve changed your lead character’s name. Apologies all round, but part 3 is planned, and I’ll stick with Craig from now on.
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Like it so far, waiting for more
I like it so far, now i'm waiting for more
Lead name switch
Great story, lead was Chris in pt1, but Craig in pt2
Chris & Craig
For those puzzled over the name change.
Chris was the virgin name, but once he was a virgin no more he got transformed into this fuck machine known as Craig. It's kinda like Jekyll & Hyde, except he can't turn back to the timid self anymore. Eventually with enough experience he could earn a first name of Daniel and then fill the shoes of James Bond, after all he is the ultimate chick magnet.
I’ll hold my hands up on this one, I totally dropped the ball on the Chris/Craig name thing! Just typical, you spend five months writing and editing a story, but fail to spot you’ve changed your lead character’s name. Apologies all round, but part 3 is planned, and I’ll stick with Craig from now on.
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