Sex within the Family

yes please!

A Part2? I mean, 'Do bears.......?' lol

Part two is a must, as is part three, four and so on.
Thanks for a fun read but maybe a longer chapter next time.

Yes!

More and more and more. Individual sisters and together.

next

Please make a part 2

Of Course, The story is Titled Sex Within the Family, no?

Fun story until now. Please, continue in the same way, and tell us what's happens with the rest of the family.
And please, longer chapters.
Congratulations!

Part 2

Great story please make part 2 and more please

Great beginning hope to read more soon.

Didn't Like it

I thought the writing was stilted and flat.

Bad, and here's why:

The narration is too clinical, and the dialog is too awkward. And the "zero to sixty" method of seduction, in which siblings who have presumably known one another for their entire lives and have never fucked each other before TYPICALLY DON'T SUDDENLY BEGIN FUCKING ONE ANOTHER. Generally speaking, to make a story believable, there's either a pre-existing and building sexual tension (which they then decide to act on), or some catalyst creates a sexual tension (which needs to build before they act on it). But in the "real" world, people don't suddenly begin fucking their parents, siblings, etc., nor do they typically have gigantic cocks or enormous breasts.

The story you've written is full of what we'd call "cliches". And cliches are indicators of amateur writers who need to work on crafting their writing ability a bit more before sharing it with others.

of course

The sister could just be a slut, which is why there was no buildup. Quicker than a whore with queue.

Good start

Guys in family with Milf mom and hot sisters jo all the time. It is good when they receive some help.

Can't wait for pt 2

Can't wait for 2

Ummm... what?

"42EE breasts, these do not sag at all, sitting proudly above her toned stomach,"

Yeah, no.
Unless they are fake, EE boobs sag.
Also, to have a 42" torso with a toned stomach, she would need to be 6'4 or be very oddly proportioned.

I like it! ...can't wait for part 2!

...and 3 ...and 4 ...possibly even 5, with ALL of them getting after it!

Harry's big fat penis is a family treasure

The 18 year old kid's already used it to blow a load in his sister's mouth, now the horny lad's wondering if he should shoot it up her sweet sisterly slit. Meanwhile there's someone lurking--could it be Harry's mom? Oh, holy fuck! Harry's mother's got the cunt to end all cunts, the same one Harry came out of 18 years before! Will the lusty big-dicked teenager actually score the cunt of his deepest dreams and blow his young balls up where he was once a baby? Inquiring perverts want to, demand to, know! The author wonders if he should add a part two. Look, Townsend, if you do not continue I will personally institute a class action suit and sue you for every dime you have. "Sex within the Family"--family fucking! The best fucking there is!

Thanks

Thanks for all the comments, thank you to those who enjoyed it and thank you for the constructive criticism, I will try and take it on board. I'm going to try and write part two soon but please be patient. It will be worth the wait.

Keep writing

Can't wait for. Part 2. Can u make it a little. Longer

Where is part 2?

Where is part 2?