A Mother's Needs Satisfied

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disgusting

hot hot

great story,,loved the content,,hope you write more..

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HOT!!!

typical

he should have lynched the nigger from a fucking tree

Gross

Really I thought thus might be cool but no it was gross...
But others like it so keep up the good work. Don't let those of us who didn't like it put you down.

Nothing nice with this story in any way at all.

Decent

It was good. I like that more people are finally starting to write about this. However I think you jumped into the sex a little too quickly. There could have been some more build up, the son seeing some more flirting between them etc. The build up is one of the hottest parts of the cuckold mother fantasy. All in all keep working man, good job

Sad

Can anybody find anything that excites and arouses in this sad story?

this is a really fucked up story. who would stay and watch his mom fuck a nigger. I sure wouldn't.

from the old one

The story is hardly readable. Perhaps some training in writing may help!

not bad

like more chapters....like for him to make the son suck him as his mother watches or helps...Darnay fucks his mothers pussy then slides his cock into the sons mouth....have the mother fuck her son with a strap-on or fuck her sons mouth with it as the sons ass is taking the black cock....Have Darnay tell the mother to smack her sons face as he fucks her or have the mother squeeze her sons balls till he screams

Gutless prick

should have manned up and bitten the coon's balls off and rammed them up his mother's nasty cunt while he had the chance.
Minus 10 stars for this drivel.

wth dude

nigga i just came here to get off man. idk what the fuck kind of thoughts go through your head but nothing about this story was at all arousing. pretty pathetic and depressing, actually. the fuck, man?

sucks

Get a life it sucks like you

This writer has obviously never been to Jamaica.

Hate

Ignore these hating ass comments and write more

Fantastic!!!

Story was a little long. I did this for real with my Mom. She set me up for it. She told me I was going to just watch from the closet as she had a man friend over. I knew the man as Gabe. He was a very tall, hairy man with at least 10 inches. Mom made me clean them both with my mouth. Then she helped Gabe take my ass cherry! More stories please! Forget all those negative fucks!

I was pinching my sissy clitty for the whole read once the action started. Being a sissy and lover of cocks, cum and creamed pussy I so envy this son. Imagine the guy doing his mother and wife while he lays under them cleaning his mom and wife. and if he is real good perhaps he will get to clean the cock. 4yourpleasureiam

amazing. this was seriously the best story ive ever read.

Look, this is actually my exact fetish. I know that some people think it's gross, but everybody has their kink, and this is mine 10/10. I personally loved the story and love how you jumped straight into the action because long buildups bore me. All i have to say to the haters is what I don't understand is why you read this stuff if it isn't your fetish. I don't go to scat fetish stories and tell people that it's gross, so if this doesn't turn you on, please don't read it. I havent read your other story yet (Im waiting till tomorrow) but i already know ill love it and i really hope you keep writing more stuff. Thank you for writing this.

Love it

I wish your stories were a bit longer. Maybe at least three times as much as now.

Would be cool if the mom got owned by the other guy. Tattoos, piercings, haircut, clothes, jewellery, pussy shaving etc...

Good story

I liked every aspect apart from his Mom having a 'pretty little pussy that looked younger than in was'. A Mommy should have a big scary gaping cunt - a big used slutty mature one that has been fucked a lot and stretched a lot and given birth!
But I am glad her sissy son has a small penis, so overall I give this a 7/10.

Great Story!!!

I loved your story. I appreciate stories about young guys who fuck older women. Keep up the good work

IN MY BOOK, EVERY VOYEUR SON STORY GETS GETS AT LEAST 3.5*. I GAVE THIS STORY A 4+ [(☆☆☆☆+) 4.45/5.0 = 89% = A]

I was a voyeur son. I was fully aware of my Oedipus Complex & felt no guilt in that regard.
As i was spying on my mom i managed to see her naked, & totally by fluke was lucky to se her doing inappropriate things with a close family friend. She was in the kitchen on the day of the house warming party at the just-renovated cottage. Everybody was in the back-yard by the lake shore - except my mom who was in the kitchen checking the stuff in the oven. She had only her bikini on her and an apron. The family friend entered the kitchen, walked toward my mom (who was standing by the range); he was whispeting something into her ear while his hand was caressing the back of my mom's high... with each stroke the hand was moving up & up until it ended on the bare portion of her gorgeous ass. She turn back toward him, with smile on her face, grabbed his hand and removed it from her bare flesh. "Are you out of your mind - she said - what if someone sees us?" I remembered that the same family friend was helping her with his pickup & his tools while the cottage was renovated.

I never loved my mom any less on the account of her (percrived & proven) transgressions. But i was TOTALLY INFATUATED with her until i was 30.

My mom was a BBW, she was 5'9" very shapely, her extra weight was in all the right places (ass, thighs, boobs...) Her flesh was NOT flabby but firm except on the inner side of her thighs where she had baby fat. Her thighs were rubbing one another as she walked. Other than that she walked like a skinny woman, her gate was firm and fast-paced.

More, longer and harder

Love your work. I hope you will write again soon. I think your scores would be higher if you wrote more stories and longer stories or chapters. You will build an audience with more stories. Longer stories let's you build your characters and fill out their motivations more completely.

Good start. 66,000 readers ain't bad, man